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When an assassin?s bartender-girlfriend unknowingly serves a poisoned martini to his boss, he takes her on the run from hired guns to find the true culprit.
Perhaps best to phrase it so that she is framed instead of going into the detail of how. After his girlfriend is framed for his bosses murder an assassin must take her on the run to find the culprit and clear her name.
Perhaps best to phrase it so that she is framed instead of going into the detail of how.
After his girlfriend is framed for his bosses murder an assassin must take her on the run to find the culprit and clear her name.
See lessWhen a malfunctioning nuke triggers a landslide and traps a plane crash survivor underground, he must lead panicky rocket scientists back to the nuke before it detonates.
Good points DPG. To that matter I recall the production designer that designed the bomber in Doctor Strangelove, saying that years after the film's release he met a real life veteran of the air force who specifically told him that he got the interior of the bombers right almost to the finer detail oRead more
Good points DPG. To that matter I recall the production designer that designed the bomber in Doctor Strangelove, saying that years after the film’s release he met a real life veteran of the air force who specifically told him that he got the interior of the bombers right almost to the finer detail of the analogue code machine. Point is, that despite the interior design of these aircraft being top-secret, through rigorous research, the art department was able to imbue a tremendous amount of realism in the scene which clearly helped make the film as suspenseful and funny as it is.
Perhaps the logic flaw here is a problem, and best to re locate the MC and scientist inside a nuke silo to get around it.
See less(REVISED) When a single-minded entrepreneur conducts an unauthorised trial of a ?telepathic phone? in a small town and accidentally transmits a virus that makes everyone lose self-control, she must find a cure with the help of the only uninfected person – a technophobic hippy.
The revised version of the logline describes the inciting incident as an event of the main character's doing. Good inciting incidents are normally bought about by an external force to the MC, which force him or her to take action. In this instance however, the MC causes the bad thing to happen so shRead more
The revised version of the logline describes the inciting incident as an event of the main character’s doing.
Good inciting incidents are normally bought about by an external force to the MC, which force him or her to take action. In this instance however, the MC causes the bad thing to happen so she is taking action to correct her mistake. This means that at the very starting point of the story her world is in a neutral state, she then makes it negative and eventually improves the state of the world back to neutral. So the world around her doesn’t change for better or worse, over the course of the story, and nor does she – she seems to lack a character flaw (single-minded isn’t necessarily a flaw), which indicates that she will change.
Point is that in order for the story to gain meaning there needs to be an element of significant change for the character and her world, currently it doesn’t seem to be the case.
What if she was over-trusting/naive a the start, and as a result of that someone else took advantage of her and infected the town? Now she must take action to save the world around her and learn a valuable lesson along the way.
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