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When his abusive stepfather tortures him for wrecking his Harley Davidson, a boy enlists in a underground fight club to toughen up and confront him.
The logline describes a story with no end, he enlists in the fight club but how long before he will actually do something to the stepfather? Perhaps define his intentions in more detail. What if the boy's nose was broken by?the stepfather, and he wants to break the stepfather's nose? Other wise whatRead more
The logline describes a story with no end, he enlists in the fight club but how long before he will actually do something to the stepfather?
Perhaps define his intentions in more detail. What if the boy’s nose was broken by?the stepfather, and he wants to break the stepfather’s nose? Other wise what does confront the stepfather actually mean? What exactly is the boy’s goal?
See lessA young man, sets out to defend his hometown when the psycho, who 15 years ago killed the young mans father, escapes from the asylum to begin his new murdering spree.
Except for the MC not being a cop, I'm not sure how this story differs from stories in most police procedural murder/serial murder episodes. Is there something else that can be added to make this story stand out, I ask as it reads like an incredibly familiar scenario - there is a killer on the looseRead more
Except for the MC not being a cop, I’m not sure how this story differs from stories in most police procedural murder/serial murder episodes. Is there something else that can be added to make this story stand out, I ask as it reads like an incredibly familiar scenario – there is a killer on the loose and the good guy must stop him.
Perhaps if the MC is in a wheel chair or agoraphobic his obstacle would make his story more interesting/original, or what if the killer had a unique method of berrying people alive so the MC has only a few days to find the victims before they suffocate.
I’m sorry if I sound harsh, but I genuinely believe the concept falls in the “seen it” category and I also believe in being genuine…
See lessA once successful landowner with picture perfect family, suddenly finds himself at the mercy of his arch-rival, forcing him to juggle single fatherhood with reclaiming his livelihood and dignity.
Agreed with the above comments, the logline fails to describe a plot. Check out the Training tab on the top bar for more detail on how best to construct a logline with all the necessary elements.
Agreed with the above comments, the logline fails to describe a plot.
Check out the Training tab on the top bar for more detail on how best to construct a logline with all the necessary elements.
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