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Honeymooners in the mountains, a man and woman, witness a poaching. The poacher now wants them dead, As they fight for their lives, they learn that time is not what it seems.
Agreed with the above.In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw? Men and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them inRead more
Agreed with the above.
In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw?
See lessMen and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them interesting characters in this story.
Struggling to rise up after a traumatic injury, a man becomes a firefighter. Hindered by extreme medical issues from the incident, he fights for both his job and a woman across the country.
Story, especial for the screen, is best thought of in finite terms. In other words, you need to define a starting point - inciting incident, and an end point - goal. Right now the revised draft of the logline describes an endless situation - he will continue to fight for the job and women to no end.Read more
Story, especial for the screen, is best thought of in finite terms. In other words, you need to define a starting point – inciting incident, and an end point – goal. Right now the revised draft of the logline describes an endless situation – he will continue to fight for the job and women to no end.
As DPG advised, best to structure a logline around an event that motivates the main character to need to achieve a particular goal.
See lessA grandfather (That dies) and his two granddaughters are stranded on an island for seven years. When the girls finally figure out how to get off the island, they find out the world is not civilized anymore because Sasquatches have taken over the city and possible the world. Please let me know your feedback. Thank you!
Agreed with DPG, the two plots rival each other for dominance over the concept. Best to focus on one in the logline and re draft. Why two daughters and why a grandfather? What is the advantage of multiple protagonists over one? That said unless the family dynamic is?a necessity in the plot it will fRead more
Agreed with DPG, the two plots rival each other for dominance over the concept. Best to focus on one in the logline and re draft.
Why two daughters and why a grandfather? What is the advantage of multiple protagonists over one? That said unless the family dynamic is?a necessity in the plot it will fall very close to Cast Away. The recent film Swiss Army Man differentiated itself from Cast Away by externalising the psychosis that the MC was experiencing, how will you make this concept different to either of these films?
It look sot me that the concept needs re thinking.
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