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When a prison gate is accidentally left open, a young female inmate must find a way to get to the gate and get her chance at freedom.
Could it be that the prisoner sees?a breach in the fencing or a large rodent hole that runs under the prison wall instead of an open gate? Then they could devise a plan to break out without risking the guards finding out about the breach of security.?
Could it be that the prisoner sees?a breach in the fencing or a large rodent hole that runs under the prison wall instead of an open gate? Then they could devise a plan to break out without risking the guards finding out about the breach of security.?
See lessWhen a shepherd is tending to his flock, one of his sheep are taken by thieves. He must find the stolen sheep in his herd.
Agreed with Richiev the wording can use some work, for example the inciting incident?could be changed to: After one of his sheep is stolen, a shepherd must? I don't know if the stakes are high enough, even in comedy higher stakes are better. What if this was a prize winning sheep, one he is relyingRead more
Agreed with Richiev the wording can use some work, for example the inciting incident?could be changed to:
After one of his sheep is stolen, a shepherd must?
I don’t know if the stakes are high enough, even in comedy higher stakes are better. What if this was a prize winning sheep, one he is relying on for breeding purposes, if he loses this one individual animal it puts many seasons of breading in danger for him.
After his prize winning buck is stolen, a shepherd must travel with his entire flock of sheep across the country to find the missing sheep.
See lessA witty half human, half dog character is discovered by a teenage boy and must kill the boy to protect his secret but instead befriends the boy.
Agreed with Dkpough1. The stakes aren't clear what does he stand to lose or gain by befriending the boy? Accordingly what is his specific goal?
Agreed with Dkpough1.
See lessThe stakes aren’t clear what does he stand to lose or gain by befriending the boy? Accordingly what is his specific goal?