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When an introverted waitress falls in love, she must seek out the man of her dreams, learning to overcome her fear of rejection.
This logline doesn't describe a plot as it uses too many generic descriptions and lacks detail. When anyone falls in love they must meet the man or woman of their dreams and overcome the fear of rejection before approaching them. Secondly the wording is confusing, if she fell in love presumably sheRead more
This logline doesn’t describe a plot as it uses too many generic descriptions and lacks detail.
When anyone falls in love they must meet the man or woman of their dreams and overcome the fear of rejection before approaching them.
Secondly the wording is confusing, if she fell in love presumably she would have already met the man of her dreams. Why must she then seek him out?
What specifically is her goal? How will she and the audience know beyond a doubt that she has gotten the guy?
And what starts her off? What is the original way in which these two lovers meet for the first time?
See lessWhen an eccentric skydiving physicist discovers he can skydive off cliffs, he must stay alive as he pushes the boundaries of this newfound way of life. ‘Sunshine Superman’
What is the main character's goal? If his goal is to stay alive then he should just not jump off a cliff. What is the dilemma here? If he chooses to jump of cliffs then he chooses to put himself at risk, this is not a big problem rather a choice he makes between the allure of the experience and theRead more
What is the main character’s goal?
If his goal is to stay alive then he should just not jump off a cliff.
What is the dilemma here?
If he chooses to jump of cliffs then he chooses to put himself at risk, this is not a big problem rather a choice he makes between the allure of the experience and the associated danger.
See lessTherefore I ask what is the main character’s goal?
The true story of the militant suffrage leader imprisoned in 1917 for picketing the White House and given 48 hours to prove her sanity or be committed to an insane asylum.
Providing the premise deals with the socio-political agenda I think best to keep the story outside of the asylum, otherwise it runs the risk of needing a male version of Nurse Ratched and establishing a whole new set of conflicts. Considering what asylums back then were like and the fact that she woRead more
Providing the premise deals with the socio-political agenda I think best to keep the story outside of the asylum, otherwise it runs the risk of needing a male version of Nurse Ratched and establishing a whole new set of conflicts.
Considering what asylums back then were like and the fact that she would no longer be able to fight for women’s rights, the risk of being committed is enough to give the story high stakes.
After being sentenced to an insane asylum for protesting outside the White House, a suffrage leader has 48 hours to prove her sanity so she can remain free to fight for women’s right to vote.
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