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When an MMA fighter finds out that her estranged country singing father has witnessed a murder and was injured resulting in amnesia, she must overcome her abandonment issues and protect him from the murderer.
One of the fundamental problems with this concept is that the inciting incident happens to the father and not the main character. When she finds out that he witnessed a murder nothing major happens to her and it doesn't directly impact her life. Therefore, I think that her resulting action seems pooRead more
One of the fundamental problems with this concept is that the inciting incident happens to the father and not the main character. When she finds out that he witnessed a murder nothing major happens to her and it doesn’t directly impact her life. Therefore, I think that her resulting action seems poorly motivated as it lacks a cause and effect relationship with what preceded it.
See lessWhen a single mother investigates her son?s claim that he was murdered in his past life, she inadvertently implicates her self in the unsolved crime and becomes the number one suspect. To prove her innocence, they go on the run, determined to find the real killer before a hard as nails detective can bring them in.
Why MUST she do anything? Kids say stuff all the time, most of which makes little to no sense. Why does she suddenly decide to take his claims seriously? Why MUST she act?
Why MUST she do anything? Kids say stuff all the time, most of which makes little to no sense. Why does she suddenly decide to take his claims seriously? Why MUST she act?
See lessA rookie female detective, out to prove herself, is tasked with protecting a single mother and her son when a serial killer learns that the young boy claims to be the re-incarnation of one of his victims, and tries to kill him again.
The premise hinges on the fact that people can be reincarnated. You'd have to make it clear beyond a doubt that the boy is indeed a reincarnation and he's not just claiming it.
The premise hinges on the fact that people can be reincarnated. You’d have to make it clear beyond a doubt that the boy is indeed a reincarnation and he’s not just claiming it.
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