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When the prison transfer bus crashes in a remote mountain forest, a rookie officer must use her training to tame the violent inmates as well as survive against dangerous wildlife and a harsh blizzard while they await rescue.
Less is more... Pick one big problem for the rookie to overcome in her mission and describe only that in the logline. All the other problems are good and would likely work well in the script but the logline needs to describe only the major obstacle.
Less is more…
Pick one big problem for the rookie to overcome in her mission and describe only that in the logline. All the other problems are good and would likely work well in the script but the logline needs to describe only the major obstacle.
See lessWhen dangerous robbers invade her remote country manor, a stubborn elderly widow must use her intimate knowledge of the building and her collection of ancient weaponry to fend them off.
This reads like it could be a good comedy. Have you considered changing the genre?
This reads like it could be a good comedy. Have you considered changing the genre?
See lessWhen a hurricane kills a middle-aged man and his nephew, the boy?s grieving father must manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and his company?s spiralling recession.
The narrative seems fragmented as the inciting, event, action and goals aren't directly connected to each other via a cause and effect relationship. How is the company related to the grieving wife and son dying? Best to rethink this story in terms of a singular narrative thread. If the start of theRead more
How is the company related to the grieving wife and son dying?
Best to rethink this story in terms of a singular narrative thread. If the start of the story is the son dying, the end of the story has to be a direct result of his actions in response to the son’s death.