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Upon being marked by a shadow creature with a hunger for humans, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and forced to confront his identity or face losing himself.
The logline is confusing - the parts aren't adding up. What is his goal by the end of the story? In what way is being marked a bad thing for him? Is his life in danger or are the people around him in danger now that he's marked?
The logline is confusing – the parts aren’t adding up.
What is his goal by the end of the story?
In what way is being marked a bad thing for him? Is his life in danger or are the people around him in danger now that he’s marked?
See lessAfter leaving a journalist seriously injured in her home, a damaged and unstable actress must deal with the situation before meeting with her estranged daughter and Child Protective Services later that day.
Agreed with Richiev. It could be read as if the actress beat up the journalist, or it could be read as if the actress found the journalist already beaten up - both of these options are very different to each other and will change the story accordingly. Lastly, what does "...deal with the situation..Read more
Agreed with Richiev.
It could be read as if the actress beat up the journalist, or it could be read as if the actress found the journalist already beaten up – both of these options are very different to each other and will change the story accordingly.
Lastly, what does “…deal with the situation…” mean? What is her goal?
See lessA lone surfer attacked by a shark and stranded on a reef must find a way back to shore before succumbing to her injuries.
Funny, I almost worked on The Shallows but ended up taking a job on a much bigger project. Friends of mine worked on it and said I dodged a bullet - the shoot was grueling and hard. I'd like to think that they all walked away with a sense of achievement as they did overcome many challenges during thRead more
Funny, I almost worked on The Shallows but ended up taking a job on a much bigger project. Friends of mine worked on it and said I dodged a bullet – the shoot was grueling and hard. I’d like to think that they all walked away with a sense of achievement as they did overcome many challenges during the shoot.
The logline reads well but sounds shallow… (pun intended) as it’s a very simple survival story. It’s so simple that it could be lean on story and not very engaging, but if done well, like in Gravity, it could be an amazing experience. Haven’t seen The Shallows so I can’t comment.
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