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  1. Posted: August 3, 2018In: Horror

    In stepping up to talk to the girl that took his breath away, a timid boy enters her world of seduction and murder and in pursuit of her he will learn the great and terrible things Man is capable of.

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    Added an answer on August 7, 2018 at 3:19 pm

    This is too vague: What does "...enters her world of seduction and murder..." mean? What are "...the great and terrible things Man is capable of..."? Be specific when describing your story and try to stick to logline conventions when doing so. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more infoRead more

    This is too vague:
    What does “…enters her world of seduction and murder…” mean?
    What are “…the great and terrible things Man is capable of…”?

    Be specific when describing your story and try to stick to logline conventions when doing so.
    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2018In: Comedy

    A man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.

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    Added an answer on August 7, 2018 at 3:10 pm

    How? Why?Will he use some of his friend's drugs himself or get his friend to write it for him? The basic mechanics of the action aren't clear.

    How? Why?
    Will he use some of his friend’s drugs himself or get his friend to write it for him? The basic mechanics of the action aren’t clear.

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2018In: Examples

    After three friends gain super-powers from a crashed alien ship, two of them must stop the third from destroying the city.

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    Added an answer on August 7, 2018 at 3:08 pm

    Chronicle (2012) - this was a good example of a successful film with a multi protag plot, which is rare, so I thought it might be interesting to review it. Would it have been a better film if it was just two friends where one was the MC and the other was the antagonist?

    Chronicle (2012) – this was a good example of a successful film with a multi protag plot, which is rare, so I thought it might be interesting to review it.

    Would it have been a better film if it was just two friends where one was the MC and the other was the antagonist?

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