1. Posted: July 26, 2018In:

    After his prizefighter abandons him, an oldfashioned trainer takes on a stubborn woman to train her for a championship challenge.

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    That's a very good point. I wonder how a dual protagonist logline would work in this case. Just a quick try: After losing his male prizefighter, a stubborn woman convinces an old fashioned trainer to collaborate towards a championship challenge.

    That’s a very good point.

    I wonder how a dual protagonist logline would work in this case.

    Just a quick try:
    After losing his male prizefighter, a stubborn woman convinces an old fashioned trainer to collaborate towards a championship challenge.

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  2. Posted: July 25, 2018In:

    After overhearing his father’s disappoinment at having the only kid without superpowers, a wicked-smart teenager fights to prove his worth by trying to stop a supervillain?s plot to eliminate everyone?s special abilities.

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    Being bullied is something that happens over many years (sadly...) and therefore makes for the MC's backstory. What single event motivated him the most to take action against the supervillain?

    Being bullied is something that happens over many years (sadly…) and therefore makes for the MC’s backstory. What single event motivated him the most to take action against the supervillain?

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  3. Posted: July 26, 2018In:

    Logline problems

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    And then what? What does he do after he realises he has a cognition problem? The logline describes act 1, what goal does he pursue in act 2?

    And then what? What does he do after he realises he has a cognition problem?

    The logline describes act 1, what goal does he pursue in act 2?

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