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In an isolated castle the 12th in line to the Earl of Northwattington, a young man attends the late Earl?s will reading but one by one the heirs are being killed. He tries to save them but is undermined by his money hungry fianc
It's too long and it lacks a clear action for the MC to take. Does he stop the murders? If so, how does he do it? Also, "...young man..." is too generic for a logline, what kind of young man is he?
It’s too long and it lacks a clear action for the MC to take.
Does he stop the murders? If so, how does he do it?
Also, “…young man…” is too generic for a logline, what kind of young man is he?
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Keep it as close as possible to 30 words and as Craig wrote describe the plot with specifics. Use a specific description for the main character, a specific event that motivates him to take action and describe a specific goal. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.
Keep it as close as possible to 30 words and as Craig wrote describe the plot with specifics. Use a specific description for the main character, a specific event that motivates him to take action and describe a specific goal.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.
See lessAfter she’s dumped in a nursing-home because her family can’t afford her care, a meek grandmother and a motley-crew of exploited residents attempt to steal back enough money from the corrupt facility owners to return home.
Thinking along the lines of recent successful films that dealt with similar subject matter I can only come up with Best Marigold Hotel. While I like the crime twist you're adding, it might work better if you leaned more towards black comedy or comedy/thriller. The goal seems a bit problematic, I thiRead more
Thinking along the lines of recent successful films that dealt with similar subject matter I can only come up with Best Marigold Hotel. While I like the crime twist you’re adding, it might work better if you leaned more towards black comedy or comedy/thriller.
The goal seems a bit problematic, I think it’s because them back home means their families could put them back in another facility in the future.
What if the oldies would fight for their independence in the facility?
For example, if the grandmother is already a resident and the inciting incident is the mob purchase the facility to exploit the elderly. The grandmother tells her family about the bad people but they don’t believe her and put it down to dementia. Now she must put together her own crew to fight for their freedom and get the criminals arrested?
Just a thought.
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