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Julia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.
Agreed with all the above comments.Let's try and unpack this:What is the main character's main goal? What must she achieve?
Agreed with all the above comments.
Let’s try and unpack this:
What is the main character’s main goal? What must she achieve?
See lessWhen his unknown opponent suffers a brain haemorrhage in the ring at a local tournament, a rookie fighter must discover the boxer’s identity and find his family to gift his prize money to them.
There seems to be a disconnect between the character development and the outer goal. In most good stories the MC needs to overcome a character flaw, this process will make up the inner journey as a pre request for achieving the outer journey goal. In other words, your protagonist needs to change asRead more
There seems to be a disconnect between the character development and the outer goal. In most good stories the MC needs to overcome a character flaw, this process will make up the inner journey as a pre request for achieving the outer journey goal. In other words, your protagonist needs to change as a person before he can give them the prise money.
What character flaw does he have? How will he change?
This may seem like a small issue, but in this kind of story, you need a good inner journey. Otherwise, you’ve got a good guy doing a good thing with little to no obstacles – no conflict and no drama.
See lessA jailed former wrestler, gets another chance in the spotlight by putting on wrestling shows in prison, but after his early parole, he struggles to cope without it.
This might work as a comedy. Is the majority of the story about him trying to get arrested again or is it set in jail about him trying to re establish his jail wrestling event?
This might work as a comedy. Is the majority of the story about him trying to get arrested again or is it set in jail about him trying to re establish his jail wrestling event?
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