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Set in 1950’s New York, a middle aged Greek immigrant has to dress like a man, in order to become a bouzouki player and raise money to get back her children from her abusive husband.
Agreed with DPG. Also, why is she separated from the kids? Was there a divorce? Did the husband kick her out of the house? What is the inciting event that sets this story in motion?
Also, why is she separated from the kids? Was there a divorce? Did the husband kick her out of the house? What is the inciting event that sets this story in motion?
Edit2 – When a man inherits his father?s fortune he is shot while he sleeps, he wakes to his final day on earth rewinding around him and must figure out who shot him before he bleeds to death.
Good notes by Paul. I'll add that it sounds like he intentionally killed the wife and after dying himself felt regret. If this is the case, it would be hard to justify empathy for the main character but if it was an accidental killing you'd likely have the audience 'on board' from the start. PerhapsRead more
I’ll add that it sounds like he intentionally killed the wife and after dying himself felt regret. If this is the case, it would be hard to justify empathy for the main character but if it was an accidental killing you’d likely have the audience ‘on board’ from the start. Perhaps it would be better to describe the killing as accidental?
When a SS General’s daughter falls in love with a Jewish boy in a concentration camp, they must stand out together to get back his family and help the Jews escape from the Germans.
Agreed with DPG. It would also have to be made clear that the girl has the means with which to save the boy and his family. Oscar Schindler had his vast fortune and influence at his disposal, but what doe the girl in this story have? How will she actually go about saving the boy? Perhaps up the ageRead more
Agreed with DPG.
It would also have to be made clear that the girl has the means with which to save the boy and his family. Oscar Schindler had his vast fortune and influence at his disposal, but what doe the girl in this story have? How will she actually go about saving the boy?
Perhaps up the age group to teenagers instead of children, this way she could arguably manipulate the system.
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