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  1. Posted: June 28, 2018In: Family

    Being mocked for his frequent hemorrhoids, a frustrated teenager forms a group with elderly patients to protest and make people sympathetic towards them.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 7:35 pm

    Making people more sympathetic is unrealistic and likely not going to solve the kid's problem. If he's got a problem with how other people are treating him, he would be better off changing his perception of what is bothersome and living a better life, instead of trying to change everyone else. The mRead more

    Making people more sympathetic is unrealistic and likely not going to solve the kid’s problem. If he’s got a problem with how other people are treating him, he would be better off changing his perception of what is bothersome and living a better life, instead of trying to change everyone else. The moral of the story is if someone hurts your feelings, form a mob and make them change. Granted this particular story has a comic element to it with the geriatrics and hemorrhoids, but it’s still pretty much the same.
    It would be more mature and realistic if the kid learned to grow as a person by ignoring the bad kids and finding a better group of friends (in this case the oldies).
    Sticks and stones…

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2018In: Comedy

    When a dedicated Cupid is forced to swap jobs with a despondent Genie, he must complete both assignments on his own to save their jobs and their immortality.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 7:26 pm

    The premise is confusing and it lacks conflict. What's stopping the cupid from doing his job or the Genie's? As for the despondent Genie, so what if the Genie isn't working as hard? Why is the Cupid motivated to do both jobs? If they've been forced into a job swap by management and the Genie ain't pRead more

    The premise is confusing and it lacks conflict.

    What’s stopping the cupid from doing his job or the Genie’s?

    As for the despondent Genie, so what if the Genie isn’t working as hard? Why is the Cupid motivated to do both jobs? If they’ve been forced into a job swap by management and the Genie ain’t pulling his weight, then it won’t impact the Cupid. It’s the Genie that will cop the flack from the boss, or the Cupid can just complain.

    Otherwise, the job of a Genie (according to legend) is to stay trapped in a lamp and once freed grant wishes.
    How is he going to do both jobs if he’s trapped in a lamp? Unless this is a different kind of Genie, or in other words, not a Genie.

    I just don’t see a story here.

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Comedy

    When he finds himself in the friend zone with the girl of his dreams his senior year of high school, a beta male must climb his way out of this inescapable trap before his Cinderella is stolen from him?.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2018 at 6:21 pm

    Sorry for the following harshness but it's best to say these things at this early stage of development. This is simply not enough for a film now day and age. It's been done and done and done. Unless you have an amazing twist up your sleeve, I'd say this is DOA.

    Sorry for the following harshness but it’s best to say these things at this early stage of development.
    This is simply not enough for a film now day and age. It’s been done and done and done.
    Unless you have an amazing twist up your sleeve, I’d say this is DOA.

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