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  1. Posted: June 26, 2018In: War

    Professional: The Faunus Rights Revolution is a thematically charged action and war drama, centered around a trio of young Faunus fighting to save their people from persecution, deportation, and death at the hands of Humanity. Commercial: In the world of Remnant, the Faunus face oppression and deportation at the hands of humans. Three young heroes join the resistance to defend their people.

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    Hi David, Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information about logline conventions.

    Hi David,

    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information about logline conventions.

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2018In: SciFi

    In the distant future: When a naive teen joins the army, his over-protective biker brother must enlist, go through the harsh training, and find the boy so that he can get him out before they’re sent to battle against nightmarish aliens.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2018 at 3:25 pm

    The logic is flawed unless the younger brother enlisted in an elite unit. Once you sign up, the army will send you wherever they need you. You can make a request but it's not likely to make much of a difference. However, if the brother was able to get accepted into a specialised unit then the olderRead more

    The logic is flawed unless the younger brother enlisted in an elite unit. Once you sign up, the army will send you wherever they need you. You can make a request but it’s not likely to make much of a difference. However, if the brother was able to get accepted into a specialised unit then the older brother has more of a chance to end up on the same base if he too is accepted.

    Otherwise, it’s not clear to me how he plans on getting his brother out of service. If his goal is to get his little bro out, him simply being a soldier ain’t going to do it.

    In Hair, for example, Burger planned on taking Bukowski’s place for an afternoon as a means of giving him a day off. The logic there was that the commanding officers couldn’t tell the difference between them once in uniform. That’s a minor problem when the unit gets called up to Vietnam and it could be argued that the sergeants sent to ship the men out weren’t familiar with the troops so the logic still works.

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  3. Posted: June 9, 2018In: Drama

    When a bookshop goes bankrupt, life is thrown into uncertainty for those who call it home. ‘D’ is eager to win a chance to launch her music career and finally escape her crippling double life. ‘B’ has a fatal secret she keeps from her surrogate children and sets out on a personal quest. While ‘W’ just lets life pass him by as he’s forced to come to grips with his sexuality and the prospect of his father never coming back for him.

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    Added an answer on June 10, 2018 at 10:31 pm

    In its current form this logline lacks most of its necessary components, so it's hard to make any useful suggestions at this stage. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar to learn more about loglines conventions.

    In its current form this logline lacks most of its necessary components, so it’s hard to make any useful suggestions at this stage.
    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar to learn more about loglines conventions.

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