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  1. Posted: October 6, 2014In: Public

    A disillusioned nuclear missile silo officer, yearning for job satisfaction, gets more than he bargained for when Earth is occupied by alien invaders and saving mankind means destroying Washington DC.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2014 at 10:02 am

    Thanks Phil congratulations to you as well. Go silver...

    Thanks Phil congratulations to you as well.

    Go silver…

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  2. Posted: October 30, 2014In: Public

    Against opposition from her family, and his mentor, a graduate from Mongolia and her Russian pen-pal, who are otherwise too poor to go away to school, road-test their courage and their friendship by joining other students and staff to launch their new floating campus aboard the Rainbow Warriors International University

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2014 at 7:25 am

    Is this a dual protagonist plot? If so what are the two trying to achieve together? Cause currently as it is described they road test their courage. This is an unclear and vague action for them to pursue together. Could you specify what it is exactly they do together that requires both of them? FurtRead more

    Is this a dual protagonist plot?

    If so what are the two trying to achieve together? Cause currently as it is described they road test their courage. This is an unclear and vague action for them to pursue together. Could you specify what it is exactly they do together that requires both of them?

    Further if the subject matter is education I think better to stick with that as the main subject matter rather than complicate the story with a secondary environmental one by using the rainbow warrior.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: October 30, 2014In: Public

    Against opposition from her family, and his mentor, a graduate from Mongolia and her Russian pen-pal, who are otherwise too poor to go away to school, road-test their courage and their friendship by joining other students and staff to launch their new floating campus aboard the Rainbow Warriors International University

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2014 at 7:25 am

    Is this a dual protagonist plot? If so what are the two trying to achieve together? Cause currently as it is described they road test their courage. This is an unclear and vague action for them to pursue together. Could you specify what it is exactly they do together that requires both of them? FurtRead more

    Is this a dual protagonist plot?

    If so what are the two trying to achieve together? Cause currently as it is described they road test their courage. This is an unclear and vague action for them to pursue together. Could you specify what it is exactly they do together that requires both of them?

    Further if the subject matter is education I think better to stick with that as the main subject matter rather than complicate the story with a secondary environmental one by using the rainbow warrior.

    Hope this helps.

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