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When a naively sentimental clown doctor is approached by an 8 year old cancer patient in the hospital a bond is made and he must find a way to make the boy smile and learn to not get attached himself.
Hi DPG Not sure what happened but I noticed a reply you posted yesterday is no longer there. Wondering if you wouldn't mind re posting your thoughts after my last post bellow. Thanks.
Hi DPG
Not sure what happened but I noticed a reply you posted yesterday is no longer there.
Wondering if you wouldn’t mind re posting your thoughts after my last post bellow.
Thanks.
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Hi Keithrafalko. I have a pilot and bible for a series with a producer for a major broadcaster at the moment as well (unfortunately can't yet divulge any details either). Can say from experience that the prime focus of a pilot is to setup a character and demonstrate the ongoing action they will takeRead more
Hi Keithrafalko.
I have a pilot and bible for a series with a producer for a major broadcaster at the moment as well (unfortunately can’t yet divulge any details either). Can say from experience that the prime focus of a pilot is to setup a character and demonstrate the ongoing action they will take throughout a series, differing genre and formats notwithstanding.
To that matter a series logline needs to identify the major plot components that will enable this over an entire season, so it’s a really good thing that you’re working on the series loglin now. I strongly recommend re working the current one, as it doesn’t do the above.
On a side note I found it very helpful to derive a logline for each ep from the main series one and if I struggled doing that the main series logline was flawed.
Hope this helps.
See lessBlue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.
Hi Keithrafalko. I have a pilot and bible for a series with a producer for a major broadcaster at the moment as well (unfortunately can't yet divulge any details either). Can say from experience that the prime focus of a pilot is to setup a character and demonstrate the ongoing action they will takeRead more
Hi Keithrafalko.
I have a pilot and bible for a series with a producer for a major broadcaster at the moment as well (unfortunately can’t yet divulge any details either). Can say from experience that the prime focus of a pilot is to setup a character and demonstrate the ongoing action they will take throughout a series, differing genre and formats notwithstanding.
To that matter a series logline needs to identify the major plot components that will enable this over an entire season, so it’s a really good thing that you’re working on the series loglin now. I strongly recommend re working the current one, as it doesn’t do the above.
On a side note I found it very helpful to derive a logline for each ep from the main series one and if I struggled doing that the main series logline was flawed.
Hope this helps.
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