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  1. Posted: April 16, 2018In: Thriller

    When a deranged brother suddenly kidnaps his younger teenage sister, she must decide whether to awaken or resist her own sadistic urges to survive without becoming a killer herself.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 3:26 pm

    'After escaping her abduction, a terrified girl makes up her mind to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.'What if you keep the abductor a secret. This can be so good, as his brother is the kidnapper and she has decided to inflict pain upon his abductor.You made it thriller. What if you tRead more

    ‘After escaping her abduction, a terrified girl makes up her mind to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.’

    What if you keep the abductor a secret. This can be so good, as his brother is the kidnapper and she has decided to inflict pain upon his abductor.

    You made it thriller. What if you turn it into comedy:

    ‘After escaping her abduction, an annoyed girl gathers balls to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.’
    It will be so funny, as her long quest with sadistic urges would end up on her brother and now she must fight her urges.

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2018In: Drama

    An opinionated former cult-member must convince his equally-opinionated family to leave the same cult before they commit the ultimate sacrifice – themselves. TITLE: Born to Die

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 2:39 pm

    (Keeping your title in mind I made him rebel against the whole cult instead of just convincing his family members) After his dogmatic cult-family agrees to a collective hecatomb, a adamant former cult member must rebel against the dictatorial cult-sovereign and save his family. (Note: The words areRead more

    (Keeping your title in mind I made him rebel against the whole cult instead of just convincing his family members)

    After his dogmatic cult-family agrees to a collective hecatomb, a adamant former cult member must rebel against the dictatorial cult-sovereign and save his family.

    (Note: The words are googled. I am an Indian.)

    Of course an inciting incident: If only it was clear what was the cult following?
    For e.g. Religious: sacramental-hecatomb
    I do not know how to use this word but if you can:
    (Apostasy: the abandonment or renunciation of a religious or political belief or principle.)

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  3. Posted: April 14, 2018In: Comedy

    Sabotaged on her studio debut, a novice filmmaker must produce her blockbuster without funds and with local amateurs to prove herself, before she loses the rights to her script.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 1:26 pm

    It sounds good. Few suggestions that come to my mind: For E.g., Anurag Kashyap is an Indian filmmaker. Before becoming a prominent filmmaker he used to write scripts for the studios for free. He is known for choosing locations that are budget friendly. Once (I think on his first project), he leasedRead more

    It sounds good. Few suggestions that come to my mind:
    For E.g., Anurag Kashyap is an Indian filmmaker. Before becoming a prominent filmmaker he used to write scripts for the studios for free.
    He is known for choosing locations that are budget friendly. Once (I think on his first project), he leased an abandoned filthy place/building as his film’s location. He leased it with the condition that he will get the place clean. And he and his amateur crew did clean it, painted it new and after the film was shot, he handed the building back and today it runs as a restaurant building. (He had to clear bags of pigeon shit from that abandoned building)
    This made his project’s budget under control.

    Conflicts can be created giving such challenges to your character.

    The novice filmmaker must prove herself before she loses the right to her script: It can be for instance, she must make her own film before the project is handed over to someone else. LOSING THE RIGHT does not sound correct as they (screenwriters) are protected and studio always has the fear of being blacklisted if they inappropriately get the rights.

    It can be (in your words) : Sabotaged on her studio debut, a novice filmmaker must produce her blockbuster before her ambitious project is handed over.

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