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Cursed by an Indian medicine man, a badass rocker must overcome the curse, to find the love of his life.
Brother this lacks too many things. This seems to be just an idea/ concept thought.
Brother this lacks too many things. This seems to be just an idea/ concept thought.
See lessAfter losing his captcha, a tone deaf scientist must prove himself human in a music duel, or slave his life in an AI camp
The movie plot: it seems hazy and confusing. In an AI driven world, a scientist is asked to compete in a music duel to prove himself being a human. This does not seem clear. If your character is a scientist then he must end up justifying his prowess over technology. A scientist is always a known perRead more
The movie plot: it seems hazy and confusing.
In an AI driven world, a scientist is asked to compete in a music duel to prove himself being a human.
This does not seem clear. If your character is a scientist then he must end up justifying his prowess over technology. A scientist is always a known person in his workplace. Having trouble to prove himself as human is hardly any plot for your scientist character. Not only that you made your character tone-deaf. Double drop.
Why scientist, why not a worker. E.g., a depressed, exiled? worker who has been working in the AI camp, without any identity, is asked to prove himself a human. This can make sense. Now the plot? – of proving himself in a music duel is hard to pull. But this can be good if the particular AI section was a musical manufacturing unit and the said genre was drama/comedy.
Based on your comments: Your plot is based upon an assumption that the AI cannot compose music like humans.? What if you create a conflict where the character is not being taken seriously of him being a human. While your character roams around the labor camp, for week, trying to get attention or someone listen to his plea, he hears a musical competition which can attract attention of higher officials and get him out of there. So he decides to participate in the concert. He needs to train himself for music, during which he gets fascinated by the amount of intelligence a music requires. He enjoys it so much that he decides to actually compete in the music duel. He makes it his obsession that only if his music is loved, he shall contact the higher officials or else he may not, and remain among the laborers.
The scientist, the captcha and AI campus are a lot confusing to fit in a musical plot. Good luck for going forward with this.
See lessAfter the catastrophic earthquakes around the world, a seismologist must uncover the reason behind the mysterious stoppage of his time at 2:00 AM, else he remains in the past.
It is good ashes. But the problem here is the character's conflict. It is only exterior.Not long ago I attended a screenwriting workshop and a man came up to describe his idea: A man discovers that the events occurring in his life have already occurred in someone else's. After finding out that the sRead more
It is good ashes. But the problem here is the character’s conflict. It is only exterior.
Not long ago I attended a screenwriting workshop and a man came up to describe his idea: A man discovers that the events occurring in his life have already occurred in someone else’s. After finding out that the said man is dead, he must uncover the mystery connection and survive.
The above plot is interesting, and the way writer described was more interesting but he was put down immediately by the head speaker as the character did not have any inner conflict.? An inner conflict makes your? character connect to the audience.?What is unique about your character that will connect the audience and drive them with his story?
I also would suggest you a non-linear approach to this. Why?
To make the audience relatable to your story’s arc. Think Batman Begins by Christopher Nolan. He unveils Bruce with a story taking place in two different situations. The?inner conflict?is easily understood.
You can show first few situations of his troubled hours and at the same time unveil the character with what just happened a few days/weeks ago that connects his troubled hours. Also adapting such approach will make you free to not rely on other people who have stopped. You can rely on science and your character.
I think the 2:00 PM time does not need to be mentioned in logline: ‘In a catastrophic earthquake the TIME stops for a volatile seismologist, he must find a way for not getting left behind in the past.’
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