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The personal, political and (un)professional life of Julie, a plucky twenty-something, determined to buy her own house.
If there was an interview of julie and anchorman would have been asking her question then it will be like: So Miss Julie tell us about yourself, something personal or political or professional or something fascinating. And miss Julie will be all determined and serious and will be like: I want to buyRead more
If there was an interview of julie and anchorman would have been asking her question then it will be like: So Miss Julie tell us about yourself, something personal or political or professional or something fascinating. And miss Julie will be all determined and serious and will be like: I want to buy my own house. (mature smile)
Done. Comedy? Plot? What next? Is she good enough to carry the whole interview? Is there any other character in line of interview whose presence can influence her actions?
Sometimes you can interview your story characters and plots asking any random question and if you are unable to answer it, you need more plot and more content. It is, infact, a good exercise before starting a whole story.
Have you thought through your basic story, if yes the above logline doesn’t reflect it. You can use the main challenge to your character to frame your logline.
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You have some good ideas but your ideas seem unoriginal. Blake Snyder's Save the Cat (a screenwriting book) has a chapter: Give me the same thing... only different! Your loglines gives me the same thing in the same way. This is your original thought and you must be able to represent it in an originaRead more
You have some good ideas but your ideas seem unoriginal.
Blake Snyder’s Save the Cat (a screenwriting book) has a chapter: Give me the same thing… only different! Your loglines gives me the same thing in the same way.
This is your original thought and you must be able to represent it in an original way.
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Your corrected version: This is the corrected logline, the original logline is: In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition. Your initial logline was better. This is incomplete and does not reflect any plot. For the initRead more
Your corrected version: This is the corrected logline, the original logline is:
In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition.
Your initial logline was better. This is incomplete and does not reflect any plot.
For the initial logline:
See lessIf you have established your character in reference to your logline, you must be good to go. You mentioned that you are yet to master English, that’s the only thing I suggest you do the earliest.
The initial version is good.