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  1. Posted: June 14, 2018In: Drama

    A doll maker that got blessed because he can reunites with his kid..

    Nettle Samurai
    Added an answer on June 15, 2018 at 10:52 pm

    You stated a character here. Have you seen Dead Silence (horror movie). Thats a movie with the same chracter (devil one).You need to put a logline where a reader can feel your whole concept and the movie.Again you put this in drama. It can be a fantasy or horror. And your name, I think it is spelledRead more

    You stated a character here. Have you seen Dead Silence (horror movie). Thats a movie with the same chracter (devil one).

    You need to put a logline where a reader can feel your whole concept and the movie.

    Again you put this in drama. It can be a fantasy or horror. And your name, I think it is spelled as ‘Prathama’????????

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  2. Posted: June 10, 2018In: Comedy

    After building a machine that can see the future, a young inventor and his friend use it to get rich, only to run afoul of gangsters.

    Nettle Samurai
    Added an answer on June 10, 2018 at 11:27 pm

    If your story is really of comedy genre then I find this 'cool'. If it will render around scientific elements more then this is 'not cool'.

    If your story is really of comedy genre then I find this ‘cool’. If it will render around scientific elements more then this is ‘not cool’.

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  3. Posted: June 10, 2018In: Fantasy

    When the boy she meets turns out to be a werewolf like her, a sheltered girl begins a forbidden relationship with that helps express their beastly forms but runs the risk of being discovered by the paranoid hicks of her small town.

    Nettle Samurai
    Added an answer on June 10, 2018 at 5:58 pm

    You stated this as fantasy, but this is a love story. If humans are social animals, you just squared them and multiplied it with beasts. What is unique? Fantasy must allow your audience to experience a whole new world. Twilight was not fantasy. What I see from your logline is that there are two wereRead more

    You stated this as fantasy, but this is a love story. If humans are social animals, you just squared them and multiplied it with beasts. What is unique?

    Fantasy must allow your audience to experience a whole new world. Twilight was not fantasy.

    What I see from your logline is that there are two werewolves who meet and decide to have a relationship. As this is forbidden, they need to run and hide from their community and in the end they will die.

    I do not mean to let your ambitions down. You may have a better and different story but this logline naturally attracts criticism.????

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