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  1. Posted: October 13, 2013In: Public

    \"A skeptical young man frantically searches for the malevolent entity that took his father\"

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 12:58 pm

    The question that immediately comes to mind is, how does someone who doesn't believe in the supernatural go after a supernatural entity such as the devil? I think it just needs to be clarified. Also, the logline should give us some idea as to what we're dealing with. The word "entity" by itself is tRead more

    The question that immediately comes to mind is, how does someone who doesn’t believe in the supernatural go after a supernatural entity such as the devil? I think it just needs to be clarified.

    Also, the logline should give us some idea as to what we’re dealing with. The word “entity” by itself is too vague.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 12:52 pm

    I don't think the "his best friend" parenthetical is needed.

    I don’t think the “his best friend” parenthetical is needed.

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 12:47 pm

    Do we need the first sentence?

    Do we need the first sentence?

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