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  1. Posted: October 12, 2013In: Public

    The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 1:14 pm

    If the year is important to the story, then it's okay to include it, but we need some context. Why is 1978 important?

    If the year is important to the story, then it’s okay to include it, but we need some context. Why is 1978 important?

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  2. Posted: October 13, 2013In: Public

    The Last Druid must use his newly acquired superpowers to save his hometown from an ancient witches curse.

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 1:08 pm

    The word "superpowers" seems out of place. Try using something along the lines of "magical abilities." It might also help to let us know about how the Druid got these new abilities.

    The word “superpowers” seems out of place. Try using something along the lines of “magical abilities.”

    It might also help to let us know about how the Druid got these new abilities.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2013In: Public

    A teenage prankster must convince his father (a cynical cop) that their elderly neighbour is a psycopath before she kills again.

    NewGrimmCity
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 1:02 pm

    I'm not sure the word "prankster" is the best choice here.

    I’m not sure the word “prankster” is the best choice here.

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