1. Posted: October 17, 2013In:

    When a bumbling businessman's necktie is used to strangle the hostess of a lavish party, he must retrieve his tie before he is implicated in the murder. Unfortunately, both the body and the necktie are missing.

    NewGrimmCity

    Thank you, that helps. To answer your question, he is there at the time of the murder and when the body goes missing, though he doesn't see the murder happen, nor does he see what happens to the body. He does, however, see the body and his tie briefly before they go missing. To find out exactly howRead more

    Thank you, that helps.

    To answer your question, he is there at the time of the murder and when the body goes missing, though he doesn’t see the murder happen, nor does he see what happens to the body. He does, however, see the body and his tie briefly before they go missing. To find out exactly how that happens, you would have to read the script.

    Again, thank you for the feedback.

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  2. Posted: October 17, 2013In:

    A troubled young woman from a dysfunctional family drags her father into a world of incest and revenge after the murder of her mother and brother.

    NewGrimmCity

    I think the second one you just gave is a lot clearer.

    I think the second one you just gave is a lot clearer.

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In:

    When a Classic Rock radio station sets up in a Texas Bible Belt army town as VetNam protests escalate, a bumbling, nerdy teen is given a life-changing opportunity to become a radio host, not knowing the Manson Family has targeted the station for violence

    NewGrimmCity

    Honestly, it's just a bit wordy. Try to get to the crux of the story and do it concisely.

    Honestly, it’s just a bit wordy. Try to get to the crux of the story and do it concisely.

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