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When a remorseful vampire is mortally wounded by a ruthless hunter, she leads a team to steal a clean-blood serum from a high security processing facility in order to heal herself for the sake of her four-year-old son.
Definitely hear you guys, and thank you so much for the help. Unfortunately, the universe of the film is one in which humans are generally unaware of the existence of vampires. If it were her son (who is not a vampire) who were injured, she could just take him to an emergency department at a hospitaRead more
Definitely hear you guys, and thank you so much for the help.
Unfortunately, the universe of the film is one in which humans are generally unaware of the existence of vampires. If it were her son (who is not a vampire) who were injured, she could just take him to an emergency department at a hospital and the problem would be resolved fairly mundanely. It’s got to be her that gets hurt, and she can’t go through normal channels to heal.
Point taken about reducing unnecessary points in the logline.
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It's unclear how the two events - finding the book and incurring the wrath - relate to each other. It's not explicitly stated that the homeschooled girl SUMMONS the demon with the help of the book, nor how that actually effects the teacher. You should make that link. ALSO ... what is at stake for thRead more
It’s unclear how the two events – finding the book and incurring the wrath – relate to each other. It’s not explicitly stated that the homeschooled girl SUMMONS the demon with the help of the book, nor how that actually effects the teacher. You should make that link.
ALSO … what is at stake for this character? And once they have incurred the wrath of the teacher (what does that look like?) What is the compelling action that the protagonist takes?
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It's unclear how the two events - finding the book and incurring the wrath - relate to each other. It's not explicitly stated that the homeschooled girl SUMMONS the demon with the help of the book, nor how that actually effects the teacher. You should make that link. ALSO ... what is at stake for thRead more
It’s unclear how the two events – finding the book and incurring the wrath – relate to each other. It’s not explicitly stated that the homeschooled girl SUMMONS the demon with the help of the book, nor how that actually effects the teacher. You should make that link.
ALSO … what is at stake for this character? And once they have incurred the wrath of the teacher (what does that look like?) What is the compelling action that the protagonist takes?
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