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  1. Posted: November 28, 2014In: Public

    a group of rich, spoiled, young superheroes called the useful league (because they couldn't come up with anything) get their powers taken away by Dr Evil who wants to show how these superheroes cant deal with the loss of their powers.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on December 3, 2014 at 6:08 pm

    ^ in summary - give your villain something he's actually trying to do ... and give it some stakes that would cause your heroes to actually need to, you know, react to it.

    ^ in summary – give your villain something he’s actually trying to do … and give it some stakes that would cause your heroes to actually need to, you know, react to it.

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  2. Posted: November 28, 2014In: Public

    a group of rich, spoiled, young superheroes called the useful league (because they couldn't come up with anything) get their powers taken away by Dr Evil who wants to show how these superheroes cant deal with the loss of their powers.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on December 3, 2014 at 6:06 pm

    That's a lame motivation for your villain; he does what he does just because he wants to make the hero's work harder? Doesn't he have anything else up his sleeve? The more focused, specific and dedicated your villain is to achieving their goal, the harder your heroes are going to have to work to achRead more

    That’s a lame motivation for your villain; he does what he does just because he wants to make the hero’s work harder? Doesn’t he have anything else up his sleeve? The more focused, specific and dedicated your villain is to achieving their goal, the harder your heroes are going to have to work to achieve it. If all he wants to do is ‘observe’, he’s not a very strong antagonist … in fact, he might not BE the antagonist in your film, the more I think about it. What are your heroes even trying to do in the story?

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  3. Posted: November 28, 2014In: Public

    a group of rich, spoiled, young superheroes called the useful league (because they couldn't come up with anything) get their powers taken away by Dr Evil who wants to show how these superheroes cant deal with the loss of their powers.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on December 3, 2014 at 6:06 pm

    That's a lame motivation for your villain; he does what he does just because he wants to make the hero's work harder? Doesn't he have anything else up his sleeve? The more focused, specific and dedicated your villain is to achieving their goal, the harder your heroes are going to have to work to achRead more

    That’s a lame motivation for your villain; he does what he does just because he wants to make the hero’s work harder? Doesn’t he have anything else up his sleeve? The more focused, specific and dedicated your villain is to achieving their goal, the harder your heroes are going to have to work to achieve it. If all he wants to do is ‘observe’, he’s not a very strong antagonist … in fact, he might not BE the antagonist in your film, the more I think about it. What are your heroes even trying to do in the story?

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