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An overzealous father gives up on life after he causes a family tragedy; his selfless daughter battling with her own pain must cling onto her faith to save him.
This logline feels too vague for me ... I can't picture your story at all. What is the specific family tragedy, and how is the father responsible for it? In what manner (taking what action) does his daughter 'save' him?
This logline feels too vague for me … I can’t picture your story at all. What is the specific family tragedy, and how is the father responsible for it? In what manner (taking what action) does his daughter ‘save’ him?
See less“When a daughter witness a murder, the father from the top of the Hells Angels must protect her until the trial.”
Is your protagonist the daughter or the President of the Hell's Angels? (He's the only one with a compelling action in your current logline). Who must he protect his daughter from? How about indicating some character flaws?
Is your protagonist the daughter or the President of the Hell’s Angels? (He’s the only one with a compelling action in your current logline). Who must he protect his daughter from? How about indicating some character flaws?
See less“When a daughter witness a murder, the father from the top of the Hells Angels must protect her until the trial.”
Is your protagonist the daughter or the President of the Hell's Angels? (He's the only one with a compelling action in your current logline). Who must he protect his daughter from? How about indicating some character flaws?
Is your protagonist the daughter or the President of the Hell’s Angels? (He’s the only one with a compelling action in your current logline). Who must he protect his daughter from? How about indicating some character flaws?
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