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  1. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 6:08 pm

    Nir - are you thinking the sequence they become friends is sort of your mid point, and things change for your character from that point?

    Nir – are you thinking the sequence they become friends is sort of your mid point, and things change for your character from that point?

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 6:06 pm

    Like Nir mentions, you're dealing with ideas too broad to be considered a story at this stage. What specifically does this government do to secure its hold on power - like, what is the actual event that occurs that is the tipping point for people to go 'you've pushed your luck too far'? Who controlsRead more

    Like Nir mentions, you’re dealing with ideas too broad to be considered a story at this stage.

    What specifically does this government do to secure its hold on power – like, what is the actual event that occurs that is the tipping point for people to go ‘you’ve pushed your luck too far’?

    Who controls the government / evil entity in your film?

    You have a goal – get the seeds – which is clear, and which I guess a lot of people seem to forget to include in their loglines, so I’ll give you that.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 6:06 pm

    Like Nir mentions, you're dealing with ideas too broad to be considered a story at this stage. What specifically does this government do to secure its hold on power - like, what is the actual event that occurs that is the tipping point for people to go 'you've pushed your luck too far'? Who controlsRead more

    Like Nir mentions, you’re dealing with ideas too broad to be considered a story at this stage.

    What specifically does this government do to secure its hold on power – like, what is the actual event that occurs that is the tipping point for people to go ‘you’ve pushed your luck too far’?

    Who controls the government / evil entity in your film?

    You have a goal – get the seeds – which is clear, and which I guess a lot of people seem to forget to include in their loglines, so I’ll give you that.

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