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A genius kid struggles to create a free energy device and getting the girl he likes, before a ruthless businessman condemns the city to obscurity.
It's unclear how all these elements connect together. How would a businessman condemn a city to obscurity, and how is that objective at odds with your protagonist seeking to create a free energy device? Getting the girl is a B-Plot, by the looks of things, and probably doesn't need to be in the loglRead more
It’s unclear how all these elements connect together.
How would a businessman condemn a city to obscurity, and how is that objective at odds with your protagonist seeking to create a free energy device?
Getting the girl is a B-Plot, by the looks of things, and probably doesn’t need to be in the logline.
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It's unclear who your protagonist is or what their goal will be. This logline boils down to "a band becomes famous." What sets this apart from a dozen other films like that?
It’s unclear who your protagonist is or what their goal will be. This logline boils down to “a band becomes famous.” What sets this apart from a dozen other films like that?
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What is at stake? Why would they need it?
What is at stake? Why would they need it?
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