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Vibrant animals, big and small roamed over the grey world of Land, Sea and air, however time is running out.
Who is your protagonist? What is their goal? Who is trying to stop them?
Who is your protagonist? What is their goal? Who is trying to stop them?
See lessWhen a playboy, slacker returns to join his father?s growing corporate empire, tensions mount between his toe-the-line older brother over who is better suited to run the company.
The logline and title tell me pretty much what I can expect from this story, which is great. I would suggest losing the comma after "playboy". Also, I'm left feeling a little "then what?" from this logline, and not in a good way. What is the conclusion your story is drawing towards? How COULD this sRead more
The logline and title tell me pretty much what I can expect from this story, which is great. I would suggest losing the comma after “playboy”. Also, I’m left feeling a little “then what?” from this logline, and not in a good way. What is the conclusion your story is drawing towards? How COULD this story end, from the elements you’ve provided?
See lessWhen the Imperial head chef is beheaded for serving uninventive dishes, the sous chef must obtain a magic cookbook in order to execute a dish pleasing to the Emperor before he and his staff are beheaded.
To where, specifically, must he travel? Mount doom?
To where, specifically, must he travel? Mount doom?
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