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Wanting to be independent of her abusive alcoholic father a teen takes driving lessons with her pensioner neighbour discovery the father figure she needs and caring really means.
The goal should be extremely hard to accomplish - everything rests on the goal which is the outer journey - without it there is no story. The audience should be clear what this goal is and know exactly the moment it is accomplished, or not. Wanting to be independent, if this indeed is the goal, willRead more
The goal should be extremely hard to accomplish – everything rests on the goal which is the outer journey – without it there is no story. The audience should be clear what this goal is and know exactly the moment it is accomplished, or not. Wanting to be independent, if this indeed is the goal, will not be enough to sustain the audience’s interest in a feature length film.
What this logline suggest is the completion of her inner journey i.e. ‘caring really means’.
See lessA fraud investigator must go to Europe and through Siberian catacombs to find out the truth about her father who mastermind an international criminal heist
The? inciting incident seems to be missing here.
The? inciting incident seems to be missing here.
See lessWhen a habitual liar forges the paperwork to establish a rural family practice, she soon finds herself in a blood-soaked examining room, trying to silence the screams of her poorly anesthetized patients.
When you describe the forger in the examining room you are describing a scene so I would? suggest removing it. I would be more interested to know who is the antagonist and the stakes which result from her misdeed. The essence of a logline should both entice the reader and give some semblance of whatRead more
When you describe the forger in the examining room you are describing a scene so I would? suggest removing it.
See lessI would be more interested to know who is the antagonist and the stakes which result from her misdeed.
The essence of a logline should both entice the reader and give some semblance of what your story will be.
Keep going, I would be interested to read another version.
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