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When an interdimensional rupture unravels reality, an unlikely hero must channel her newfound powers to fight bizarre and bewildering dangers from the multiverse as the fate of the world hangs in the balance.
I think getting the IRS off her back is certainly one of the more mundane goals in this film. In cinematic terms, I guess this means to defeat Jamie Lee Curtis.
I think getting the IRS off her back is certainly one of the more mundane goals in this film. In cinematic terms, I guess this means to defeat Jamie Lee Curtis.
See lessIn the near future, a young genius escapes a moonbase where a madman secretly enslaves scientists in his plan to wipe out life on Earth but when no one believes him, he alone must find a way to destroy the base and free the other scientists.
It's a cool, dramatic premise. I don't get a feel for the character yet, though. "Young genius" is not enough to promise an engaging character for me. What personal challenges does the character face? Also, the survival of mankind is only a valid stake if there is someone close to the MC that we carRead more
It’s a cool, dramatic premise. I don’t get a feel for the character yet, though.
“Young genius” is not enough to promise an engaging character for me.
What personal challenges does the character face?
Also, the survival of mankind is only a valid stake if there is someone close to the MC that we care enough for to understand why he does it, other than out of self-preservation. This is why so many disaster movies are centred around families and/or couples.
Finally, I would prefer to see a logline following our formula, starting with ‘when’.
See lessRight now I struggle to see a clear trigger incident for the story, which means there may be a lot of exposition and backstory.
While waiting for the results of some tests, Marc, a young man with cancer, meets Oscar. The two young men end up having an exciting romantic relationship. After discharge the boys decide to take a trip around the world. But your secrets will come out.
The logline is not presented in the format that is recommended on this site. Please have a look at the tutorials under "START HERE" and "Formula". Leaving our recommended format aside, this is still not an industry standard logline. You'll do so much better following the advice we give. A few pointeRead more
The logline is not presented in the format that is recommended on this site. Please have a look at the tutorials under “START HERE” and “Formula”.
Leaving our recommended format aside, this is still not an industry standard logline. You’ll do so much better following the advice we give.
A few pointers:
– don’t name the characters. The story needs to work without names.
– write it in ONE sentence. This is a paragraph synopsis.
– focus on what you want the reader to imagine in terms of action. Right now, there is none.
Good luck.
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