1. Posted: September 28, 2015In:

    A corporate burnout turned janitor receives a call from his ex-wife wanting to rekindle their marriage. Desperate to make it work, he must tell the truth and divulge his new career as a janitor.

    Karel Segers Samurai

    Love the concept! Wouldn't the conflict be that he tries to hide his new career? And what is at stake for him? Does he also want to rekindle the marriage?

    Love the concept!

    Wouldn’t the conflict be that he tries to hide his new career?

    And what is at stake for him? Does he also want to rekindle the marriage?

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2015In:

    When naive but not stupid pizza master realized that he inherited a Mafia don, must confront the heads of the other families in order to bring the family business into legal channels.

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    Karel Segers Samurai

    Hi Babaroga, Cool concept! What do you mean by "confront the heads of the other families"? I am assuming that the conflict in this story drives from the fact that once you're in the Mafia, you can't get out. And this is exactly what the pizza master wants to do, right? On a side note, I noticed thatRead more

    Hi Babaroga,

    Cool concept!

    What do you mean by “confront the heads of the other families”?

    I am assuming that the conflict in this story drives from the fact that once you’re in the Mafia, you can’t get out.

    And this is exactly what the pizza master wants to do, right?

    On a side note, I noticed that you have posted quote a few loglines, but only just as many reviews.

    May I ask you kindly to keep the ration loglines/reviews to 1/2, or close to that? Thanks!

    Cheers,

    Karel

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