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  1. Posted: October 11, 2015In: Comedy

    When a womanizing porn-star’s penis falls off due to a spell cast on him by his possessive porn-star wife he must undo the spell before the biggest shoot of his career and save his relationship.

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on October 11, 2015 at 5:00 pm

    Love the high concept! I'm just wondering whether "womanizing porn star" is in fact ironic. Isn't it part of the persona that they are? Or perhaps it's funny just because his meets the prejudice? Obviously there is a great Inciting Incident. We immediately see the high-stakes value of this. My questRead more

    Love the high concept!

    I’m just wondering whether “womanizing porn star” is in fact ironic. Isn’t it part of the persona that they are? Or perhaps it’s funny just because his meets the prejudice?

    Obviously there is a great Inciting Incident. We immediately see the high-stakes value of this.

    My question is: what is there to expect in Act 2. He has to stop womanizing? That would be an Inner Journey. He doesn’t really have a clear outer journey, because we don’t see a (logical) way for him to get his ‘essential tool’ back… In other words: what are the goals and the obstacles in the Outer Journey, while he tries to prove himself to his wife?

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Student Loglines

    When a financial analyst who only lives for work meets her true love, a laidback skateboarder, over a late night release party she wakes up next day realizing she got pregnant. In love as she is she decides to move in together with her newly found love and start family life. Though, to handle everyday family-life after 20 years as a workaholic puts her whole self-image back at work at stake!

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on October 9, 2015 at 6:36 pm

    "When a responsible, workaholic corporate exec falls pregnant after a one-night stand with a skater, and moves in with him to start family life, she struggles to juggle her professional image at work with her new duties as a mother."

    “When a responsible, workaholic corporate exec falls pregnant after a one-night stand with a skater, and moves in with him to start family life,
    she struggles to juggle her professional image at work with her new duties as a mother.”

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2015In: 01, Family

    Thwarting constant deportation attempts while managing daily household affairs, a young illegal immigrant girl musters precocious wits to win her school the national academic games championship

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 7:59 am

    Thanks. That explains it. But ... "the movie opening is an ordinary wake up before breakfast and going to school" ... Ahum... Don't do this, JM. EVERY student film opens like this!! ;) Find a better opening of your film. A hook that will immediately grab us. NOTHING in a film should be 'ordinary' toRead more

    Thanks. That explains it.

    But …

    “the movie opening is an ordinary wake up before breakfast and going to school” …

    Ahum…

    Don’t do this, JM. EVERY student film opens like this!! 😉

    Find a better opening of your film. A hook that will immediately grab us.

    NOTHING in a film should be ‘ordinary’ to the audience, even if it is to the character (their ‘Ordinary World’).

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