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  1. Posted: February 15, 2015In: Public

    A lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 8:00 pm

    Hi Richiev, thanks for the comment. I think the answer is if our characters were capable of doing everything at the beginning of the movie, then we wouldn't really have a movie. If John McClane could tell his wife how he felt then we wouldn't have Die Hard. In this case he does make an attempt, butRead more

    Hi Richiev, thanks for the comment.

    I think the answer is if our characters were capable of doing everything at the beginning of the movie, then we wouldn’t really have a movie. If John McClane could tell his wife how he felt then we wouldn’t have Die Hard.

    In this case he does make an attempt, but it’s lame and doesn’t work. He sees her with a rich guy with a nice car and (incorrectly) decides that’s what he needs to do to win her over. Of course later in the movie he also realizes that this is wrong and he should have just talked to her. I’m sure there’s plenty of people out there who will tell you asking a girl out on a date isn’t the easiest thing in the world to do. For some it may be the hardest.

    Also he doesn’t need to blackmail his parents, but they tell him to do something with his life and won’t give him the money he needs, then he catches them out and makes the most of the opportunity.

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  2. Posted: February 15, 2015In: Public

    A lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 8:00 pm

    Hi Richiev, thanks for the comment. I think the answer is if our characters were capable of doing everything at the beginning of the movie, then we wouldn't really have a movie. If John McClane could tell his wife how he felt then we wouldn't have Die Hard. In this case he does make an attempt, butRead more

    Hi Richiev, thanks for the comment.

    I think the answer is if our characters were capable of doing everything at the beginning of the movie, then we wouldn’t really have a movie. If John McClane could tell his wife how he felt then we wouldn’t have Die Hard.

    In this case he does make an attempt, but it’s lame and doesn’t work. He sees her with a rich guy with a nice car and (incorrectly) decides that’s what he needs to do to win her over. Of course later in the movie he also realizes that this is wrong and he should have just talked to her. I’m sure there’s plenty of people out there who will tell you asking a girl out on a date isn’t the easiest thing in the world to do. For some it may be the hardest.

    Also he doesn’t need to blackmail his parents, but they tell him to do something with his life and won’t give him the money he needs, then he catches them out and makes the most of the opportunity.

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  3. Posted: January 24, 2015In: Public

    After the contamination system traps three research assistants in an underground lab, they discover the leaked gas triggers a psychopathic cannibalistic rage in the lab rats. (For MEETUP)

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on January 24, 2015 at 11:33 am

    UPDATED FROM MEETUP: After the contamination system locks a highly driven research assistant in an underground lab with her rival co-workers, she discovers the leaked gas induces cannibalistic rage in the lab rats. I'm just not sure that makes it clear that the threat comes from the co-workers and nRead more

    UPDATED FROM MEETUP:

    After the contamination system locks a highly driven research assistant in an underground lab with her rival co-workers, she discovers the leaked gas induces cannibalistic rage in the lab rats.

    I’m just not sure that makes it clear that the threat comes from the co-workers and not the rats. Not sure cannibalistic is enough to imply that the rats only attack each other, and that the humans may do the same because they’ve breathed the same gas.

    Either that or I take out the rats altogether?

    After the contamination system locks a highly driven research assistant in an underground lab with her rival co-workers, she discovers the leaks gas induces psychopathic behaviour.

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