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After brutal injuries from a notorious torturer leave a man with no memory, his only hope of regaining his identity is to help the FBI hunt his captor?s, before they can finish the job.
Thanks Sharkeatingman, good stuff. Have you seen the latest Jason Statham action flick Safe? It's about the Triads who like things old fashioned, they don't like computers because they leave a trail. So they import a genius young girl from China with a photographic memory to run their books. SoundsRead more
Thanks Sharkeatingman, good stuff. Have you seen the latest Jason Statham action flick Safe? It’s about the Triads who like things old fashioned, they don’t like computers because they leave a trail. So they import a genius young girl from China with a photographic memory to run their books. Sounds similar to yours.
As for the mans description or his profession. He doesn’t have any at all. He’d completely a blank slate. Which is a risky thing to attempt in a script. Any time he lacks drive or direction the story is driven by the super determined young female FBI agent who’s helping him.
As for the notorious part. Yea, it wasn’t how I wanted it. It needs to more of a mythical torturer. Someone with a legend like Kaiser Soze. Something to hook in the audience.
And the genre is Psychological Thriller.
As with all loglines, I’m having real trouble knowing what info to leave in and what to cut. My next attempt I hope to have it more concise.
See lessHaving lost everything to the I.R.S., a wealthy and materialistic New York executive couple is forced to start all over again with nothing? in the heart of the Bermuda Triangle!
Sounds like 'Fun with Dick and Jane' set in an exotic location. It's a fish out of water story two times over. Once, because they're now poor and not used to that life. And second, because they go from living in New York to the Bermuda Triangle. A good setup. But it lacks direction. Maybe just a hinRead more
Sounds like ‘Fun with Dick and Jane’ set in an exotic location. It’s a fish out of water story two times over. Once, because they’re now poor and not used to that life. And second, because they go from living in New York to the Bermuda Triangle.
A good setup. But it lacks direction. Maybe just a hint at their goal. Do they wish to get rich again? Do they want to escape Bermuda and return to New York?
Certainly has potential.
See lessHouse of Duncan, action/thriller
This logline is long and yet it still tells us little. Or more to the point, it tells us unnecessary information. Do we need to know their nationalities? Does that effect the story. And I to thought the Brazilian was the protagonist. The logline reads from his point of view. Something more along theRead more
This logline is long and yet it still tells us little. Or more to the point, it tells us unnecessary information. Do we need to know their nationalities? Does that effect the story.
And I to thought the Brazilian was the protagonist. The logline reads from his point of view.
Something more along the lines of: When his girlfriend’s wealthy and debonair former flame returns on the scene, a meek Accountant must fight for her before…
See lessNot really sure how it plays out after that.