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A conniving ad executive, who moonlights at night as a homeless person, suddenly loses everything and is forced to live on the streets for real!
Sounds like a good 'fish out of water' premise. By his profession I assume he's wealthy, so it's a big change to be homeless. And because he's conniving, I can see he has room for an arc once he can see the other side of the fence. How the others live. And change his ways. However, it leaves me wondRead more
Sounds like a good ‘fish out of water’ premise. By his profession I assume he’s wealthy, so it’s a big change to be homeless. And because he’s conniving, I can see he has room for an arc once he can see the other side of the fence. How the others live. And change his ways.
However, it leaves me wondering, how did it happen? Might be too detailed to include in the logline, and maybe by not knowing I become more curious. But it does border on the unbelievable, and I would prefer to have a plausible explanation as to why he has to live on the streets. But maybe that’s just me.
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While the storyline could work, I don't believe it's enough by itself. The logline is so generalized and vague, it could be describing almost any love triangle. The only thing specifically mentioned is that he is a teacher. And this tells us little. It sounds more like a B story. There needs to be mRead more
While the storyline could work, I don’t believe it’s enough by itself. The logline is so generalized and vague, it could be describing almost any love triangle. The only thing specifically mentioned is that he is a teacher. And this tells us little.
It sounds more like a B story. There needs to be more. Some sort of hook to differentiate this from other stories. To make it stand out. Something else going on, and more at stake. His job maybe?
I find myself thinking that I don’t really care if he works it out or not. So why would I watch it?
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Sounds intriguing. What does the teenager get out of it? Why would he risk getting involved with the mob? Otherwise, a very strong logline. Good dramatic irony in that he is a scam artist, but uses his skills as a con man for good. I can already see his character arc. A clear inciting incident, andRead more
Sounds intriguing. What does the teenager get out of it? Why would he risk getting involved with the mob?
Otherwise, a very strong logline. Good dramatic irony in that he is a scam artist, but uses his skills as a con man for good. I can already see his character arc. A clear inciting incident, and clear goal. No stakes are mentioned, but I guess if the mob is involved, it’s pretty obvious.
I like it.
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