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  1. Posted: October 6, 2014In: Public

    A disillusioned nuclear missile silo officer, yearning for job satisfaction, gets more than he bargained for when Earth is occupied by alien invaders and saving mankind means destroying Washington DC.

    Blue Parrot
    Added an answer on October 7, 2014 at 7:23 pm

    dpg- wow you went to technical town there may man lol. I do appreciate you taking the time though (you too Nir, cheers!) To respond a little ... This is aiming to be a high concept logline so I'm not trying to ram in the usual stuff. It's a first attempt at one, anyway. My idea was inspired by a strRead more

    dpg- wow you went to technical town there may man lol. I do appreciate you taking the time though (you too Nir, cheers!)

    To respond a little …

    This is aiming to be a high concept logline so I’m not trying to ram in the usual stuff. It’s a first attempt at one, anyway.

    My idea was inspired by a string of news reports in the US about problems within the officer ranks at these silos. If you’re curious you can google them or have a look at this VERY funny and FRIGHTENING piece that was on ‘Last Week Tonight with John Oliver’

    Yes, I want this to be a contained thriller sci-fi. It all pretty much happens in the missile silo. He gets his news about the big picture through Youtube or something like that.

    I imagine him meeting a girl at a bar in the beginning, lonely hearts kind of thing, maybe a strip joint. The alien attack happens, she runs to the silo asking for shelter. He lets her in but unknowingly lets in one of the aliens in too perhaps. There is another guy in the silo with him but there is no need to mention him in the logline. Maybe there are few officers, guys and girls. I kinda picture it like Aliens, but on Earth, in a missile silo. a bit of Das Boot atmosphere also.

    In my yet-to-be-fully-outlined idea, I’m picturing the kind of sci-fi type scenario where the ‘mother’ alien has wrapped herself around the Capitol building. If the hero nukes her, all the aliens die, hence the targeting of DC. And yes, I figured people would kinda get a kick out of that lol.

    Anyway, early days. Thanks again!

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  2. Posted: October 1, 2014In: Public

    After being a turned into a djinn by an evil wizard, a young trickster must hunt the man down after being trapped for a thousand years and get him to reverse the curse before his new master uses his three wishes to take control of the world.

    Blue Parrot
    Added an answer on October 6, 2014 at 12:52 pm

    Perhaps you need to make some kind of obstacle clearer in the logline e.g. - the young trickster has been turned into a genie, but his wishes grant the opposite of what is wished for and the genie can't warn people of this, so he searches for the person who gave him this evil curse I think it is takRead more

    Perhaps you need to make some kind of obstacle clearer in the logline

    e.g.

    – the young trickster has been turned into a genie, but his wishes grant the opposite of what is wished for and the genie can’t warn people of this, so he searches for the person who gave him this evil curse

    I think it is taken for granted that genie’s cannot grant themselves wishes, or most film/ literature about them would be very different up to now.

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  3. Posted: October 1, 2014In: Public

    After being a turned into a djinn by an evil wizard, a young trickster must hunt the man down after being trapped for a thousand years and get him to reverse the curse before his new master uses his three wishes to take control of the world.

    Blue Parrot
    Added an answer on October 6, 2014 at 12:52 pm

    Perhaps you need to make some kind of obstacle clearer in the logline e.g. - the young trickster has been turned into a genie, but his wishes grant the opposite of what is wished for and the genie can't warn people of this, so he searches for the person who gave him this evil curse I think it is takRead more

    Perhaps you need to make some kind of obstacle clearer in the logline

    e.g.

    – the young trickster has been turned into a genie, but his wishes grant the opposite of what is wished for and the genie can’t warn people of this, so he searches for the person who gave him this evil curse

    I think it is taken for granted that genie’s cannot grant themselves wishes, or most film/ literature about them would be very different up to now.

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