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With an uncanny ability to foresee death while painting, an artist’s prediction forces him to abandon his true love in order to save her.
Thank you everyone for all your suggestions. I reworked the line and I think I like the new version.
Thank you everyone for all your suggestions. I reworked the line and I think I like the new version.
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No sir, you are right. I updated based on your suggestions. You are actually brilliant. But to answer your question, the action he takes is: he enters into a clandestine affair with her when she returns, but that's a lot to add. It's actually quite tragic based on this man's inability to truly act.
No sir, you are right. I updated based on your suggestions. You are actually brilliant. But to answer your question, the action he takes is: he enters into a clandestine affair with her when she returns, but that’s a lot to add. It’s actually quite tragic based on this man’s inability to truly act.
See lessWith an uncanny ability to foresee death while painting, an artist’s prediction forces him to abandon his true love in order to save her.
Yes, 'predict' death or foresee. Him being a portrait artist has nothing to do with it, just identifies him. His lost love isn't dead. Just separated from him, so maybe an update. Thank you for your input.
Yes, ‘predict’ death or foresee. Him being a portrait artist has nothing to do with it, just identifies him. His lost love isn’t dead. Just separated from him, so maybe an update. Thank you for your input.
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