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  1. Posted: October 18, 2012In: Public

    An Animal Psychologist fakes a coma to honor his departed wife's final request of bringing their estranged kids home for Christmas.

    Poromaa Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 18, 2012 at 5:00 pm

    Great logline. I like the premise of the story! Did the wife die or did she just run away? If she died, I would try to end the logline with that fact in order to make it more dramatic. Something like: An Animal Psychologist fakes a coma to bring his estranged kids home for Christmas, all according tRead more

    Great logline. I like the premise of the story! Did the wife die or did she just run away? If she died, I would try to end the logline with that fact in order to make it more dramatic. Something like:

    An Animal Psychologist fakes a coma to bring his estranged kids home for Christmas, all according to the last will of his departed wife.

    ?r dock inte 100 p? engelska s? jag kanske missf?rs?r?

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  2. Posted: October 17, 2012In: Public

    An erotic tale of a bright, young and Musically-gifted African-American woman who grows up in the 1970s, jaded by her abusive childhood. During her attempt at rock and roll stardom, she is distracted by a tragic discovery: she may have become her violent father.

    Poromaa Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 18, 2012 at 2:43 am

    I believe its way over 30 words. Not sure thats a rigid rule, but it certainly makes it easier to grasp. Some of the information might not be necessary for the logline. I know, this suck, but you get the point...: Jaded by an abusive childhood, a musically-gifted African-American woman struggles, trRead more

    I believe its way over 30 words. Not sure thats a rigid rule, but it certainly makes it easier to grasp. Some of the information might not be necessary for the logline.

    I know, this suck, but you get the point…:
    Jaded by an abusive childhood, a musically-gifted African-American woman struggles, trough the 70’s world of sex and rock-and-roll, against becoming her violent father.

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  3. Posted: October 16, 2012In: Public

    When a ruthless bank robber finds a gate to a parallel universe, any crime seems possible to escape, until the other self gets to take the blame.

    Poromaa Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 16, 2012 at 10:37 pm

    Without changing (or revealing) too much of the story I changed it a bit. When a ruthless criminal finds a gate to a parallel universe, any crime may be escaped, until the other self follows with a deadly revenge I will think more about this. Thanks for the reply

    Without changing (or revealing) too much of the story I changed it a bit.

    When a ruthless criminal finds a gate to a parallel universe, any crime may be escaped, until the other self follows with a deadly revenge

    I will think more about this. Thanks for the reply

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