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  1. Posted: February 19, 2013In: Public

    When his ball busting ex-wife?s abrupt advice becomes a sensation, a beleaguered radio producer must swallow pride and mend fences before his stations ratings plummet back to the cellar.

    Poromaa Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 19, 2013 at 10:37 pm

    To me it sounds like this story is about a complicated relationship of the radio producer and his ex. Maybe you don't need to tell so much about the exact circumstances? When a radio producer on the edge of loosing his job gets dependent on his ball-busting ex-wifes hi-jacked radio appearance, he haRead more

    To me it sounds like this story is about a complicated relationship of the radio producer and his ex. Maybe you don’t need to tell so much about the exact circumstances?
    When a radio producer on the edge of loosing his job gets dependent on his ball-busting ex-wifes hi-jacked radio appearance, he has to do anything to keep her under control, despite her unforgiving hate.
    (im not english so i suck at this, but you get the picture)

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  2. Posted: January 17, 2013In: Public

    To provide for his disabled brother, a debt-coated dealer accepts a highly secretive job for a world famous chef, as purveyor of an illegal, secret ingredient.

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    Added an answer on January 17, 2013 at 7:24 am

    Thanks! Wanted to reduce the words, and tried to translate the logline from my language. Maybe this: To provide for his disabled brother, a debt ridden drug dealer accepts a highly secretive job for a world famous chef, as purveyor of an illegal, secret ingredient And while you kind of see my storyRead more

    Thanks!
    Wanted to reduce the words, and tried to translate the logline from my language.

    Maybe this:
    To provide for his disabled brother, a debt ridden drug dealer accepts a highly secretive job for a world famous chef, as purveyor of an illegal, secret ingredient

    And while you kind of see my story the idea was that the dealer will struggle trough the film following all instructions to become the courier, including staging his own suicide (to become untraceable for the police)…. to finally realise that the package is not the box he delivers, but himself… So yeah. The chef uses humans as spice to his delicious world famous high class meal.

    This is hidden though (or at least thats my intention). There is money involved and a female cop tracing him (not buying the suicide) that saves him the last minute. Killing the bad guys, leaving him with only the money.

    I don’t want it too obvious, but if you write a logline that hides the real plot, then you won’t be able to see it…..

    Have not seen “the cook, the thief….” but reading the plot, I don’t have much in common except the cannibalism…

    Any thoughts are welcome.

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  3. Posted: October 18, 2012In: Public

    A poor Occupy Wall Street protester finds a coin that predicts stock prices, becomes rich, and uses his new fortune to take on the fat cat banker tormenting him.

    Poromaa Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 18, 2012 at 5:04 pm

    Like this one.

    Like this one.

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