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After literally dying onstage, a caustic comedian's only shot at getting into Heaven is to fix three lives ruined because of him.
I considered that, but think it still works without it. Will still give it a try, though. Thanks!
I considered that, but think it still works without it. Will still give it a try, though.
Thanks!
See lessAfter literally dying onstage, a caustic comedian's only shot at getting into Heaven is to fix three lives ruined because of him.
I considered that, but think it still works without it. Will still give it a try, though. Thanks!
I considered that, but think it still works without it. Will still give it a try, though.
Thanks!
See lessAfter falling through a wormhole, a powerful young superhero with supernatural power is thrown through a whirlwind when he finds himself in the "Real World" where he and his adventures have been nothing more than a series of books.
A little wordy, but I like the concept. This is a good set-up, but it doesn't really tell us what the story's about. It feels like this is what happens in Act One. A few things to consider: -What's your hero's goal? Getting home? Proving he's real? -Now that he's "here", what happens now? Is he on hRead more
A little wordy, but I like the concept. This is a good set-up, but it doesn’t really tell us what the story’s about. It feels like this is what happens in Act One.
A few things to consider:
-What’s your hero’s goal? Getting home? Proving he’s real?
-Now that he’s “here”, what happens now? Is he on his own? Does a “regular person” help him? What’s the primary storyline?
-Any superhero-based story needs a villain. Who’s his, and what role does he play in the overall story?
-“powerful young superhero with supernatural powers” is too much of the same thing. “Young superhero” works fine. Same with “wormhole” and “whirlwind”. I’d keep the former.
-What kind of guy is he? Brash? Egotistical? Naive? What adjective best describes him?
The more I think about this, the more it seems similar to LAST ACTION HERO. Not a great movie, but maybe worth watching to see how the story compares to yours.
Good luck!
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