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  1. Posted: April 18, 2013In: Public

    An envious thief is caught in the crossfire after stealing a car that harbors the recently abducted First Lady.

    Jeremy Gordon
    Added an answer on April 18, 2013 at 8:38 pm

    hey TOR. I may be wrong, but should the protagonist's flaw be relevant to the logline?

    hey TOR. I may be wrong, but should the protagonist’s flaw be relevant to the logline?

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  2. Posted: April 18, 2013In: Public

    The inept leader of a group of real-life superheroes discovers the true costs of heroism after a rogue member crosses a brutal crime boss.

    Jeremy Gordon
    Added an answer on April 18, 2013 at 10:13 am

    An inept "leader" ?? That's fairly hard to get past, almost an oxymoron. I'll have to come back to this one.

    An inept “leader” ?? That’s fairly hard to get past, almost an oxymoron. I’ll have to come back to this one.

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  3. Posted: April 17, 2013

    A college photography student who discovers terrifying images of ghostly children in her shots of an abandoned amusement park races to uncover a decades-old mystery to save her son from the vengeful spirits.

    Jeremy Gordon
    Added an answer on April 17, 2013 at 3:00 pm

    I liked the original more... I had left a comment but it never showed up. It seems to me that this version has lost the essence/flow/feel of the first.

    I liked the original more… I had left a comment but it never showed up. It seems to me that this version has lost the essence/flow/feel of the first.

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