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After a troubled teen girl is caught vandalizing state property, she is ordered to spend 6 months in juvenile detention center; where she falls in love with the, married, faculty art teacher.
I'm not sure it needs to mention the vandalizing? Sure there's a possible link between her "graffiti" and the "art" teacher... but it could just start: While serving six months in juvie... It is afterall a "forbidden love" story, yes? Give us a hint in the logline wether it's about the courting andRead more
I’m not sure it needs to mention the vandalizing? Sure there’s a possible link between her “graffiti” and the “art” teacher… but it could just start:
While serving six months in juvie…
It is afterall a “forbidden love” story, yes? Give us a hint in the logline wether it’s about the courting and seduction… or the deceit of trying to get away with it behind everyone’s back…
See lessThe matriarch of an Arizona boomtown receives the unlikely help of a notorious outlaw to rid her town of a ruthless Marshal and the corrupt Territorial Judge who employs him.
I see a lot of good characterization here, however, not much else. Is the story comedy/drama about trying to get rid of them? Or about what happens after they get rid of them, and when then try come back? An unlikely duo join forces to rid a small town from a corrupt judge and his loyal sidekick wheRead more
I see a lot of good characterization here, however, not much else. Is the story comedy/drama about trying to get rid of them? Or about what happens after they get rid of them, and when then try come back?
An unlikely duo join forces to rid a small town from a corrupt judge and his loyal sidekick when/but…
See lessAfter her friend accidentally discovers time travel through memory research, a habitually cautious woman risks her sanity and ultimately her father's life by returning to her early teen years to prevent her Charlston-socialite mother's murder.
The premise caught me. Time travel. Awesome. Through memory research... plausible. So far so good. Then I have to agree with dpg: the friend discovering it seems quite passive on the protagonists part, but... not the end of the world. My immediate questions were: "Why does it matter that she's habitRead more
The premise caught me. Time travel. Awesome. Through memory research… plausible. So far so good. Then I have to agree with dpg: the friend discovering it seems quite passive on the protagonists part, but… not the end of the world.
My immediate questions were: “Why does it matter that she’s habitually cautious?”, “How is she risking her sanity?”, “How is she risking her father’s life?” and “What’s the mother’s murder got to do with anything?”
A little confused to be completely honest… but definately merit for a good story in there.
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