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When a nerdy guy, who no one would like to date, is pranked , he creates using AI and robotics the hottest girl ever existed in the universe and programs it to date him , surprising and shocking everyone.
"After being humiliated by the most popular girl in school, a nerdy programmer creates a hot robot girlfriend to prove to his classmates he's got some rizz." ------ Not sure if rizz is the correct word, perhaps the word 'game' instead. Or perhaps he creates the hot robot to make his crush jealous soRead more
“After being humiliated by the most popular girl in school, a nerdy programmer creates a hot robot girlfriend to prove to his classmates he’s got some rizz.”
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Not sure if rizz is the correct word, perhaps the word ‘game’ instead.
Or perhaps he creates the hot robot to make his crush jealous so she will change her mind and go out with him. (but, falls for the robot instead lol)
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It is difficult to tell whether your use of the word, 'them' is used as a plural, or if it is a gender identifier. In other words, is there a single Japanese prisoner of war that the lead befriends? Or is he befriending the entire community within the internment camp? If it is the latter and he befrRead more
It is difficult to tell whether your use of the word, ‘them’ is used as a plural, or if it is a gender identifier.
In other words, is there a single Japanese prisoner of war that the lead befriends? Or is he befriending the entire community within the internment camp?
If it is the latter and he befriends the entire Japanese community, you should still have a single prisoner with whom the lead has a deeper connection, then as the third act ramps up, you should put that person in danger.
Anyway, I believe this is a solid premise. Very interesting.
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A logline must be compelling, it's what sells the story to the industry. Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific. There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal. The event should alsoRead more
A logline must be compelling, it’s what sells the story to the industry.
Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific.
There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal.
The event should also be horrific enough that the reader will understand why it might compel an ordinary person to take the law into their own hands.
Finally, there should be stakes of some sort if the lead character fails.
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