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  1. Posted: August 3, 2018In: Comedy

    After his future self moves in and starts dating his girlfriend, a once complacent vacuum salesman struggles against fate to prevent the hell he?s living from setting in stone

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 4, 2018 at 4:14 am

    When you use the word 'encounter, it makes it seem random. You are walking down the street and encounter your neighbor. 'Then you say 'intending to better his life' which makes it seem like he purposely meets his future self. The question is, is it a random encounter or is meeting his future self aRead more

    When you use the word ‘encounter, it makes it seem random. You are walking down the street and encounter your neighbor.

    ‘Then you say ‘intending to better his life’ which makes it seem like he purposely meets his future self.

    The question is, is it a random encounter or is meeting his future self a planned event,

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2018In: Coming of Age

    Julia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 12, 2018 at 8:11 am

    If the 'she' in the second half of the logline is the girl who's younger sister is going into surgery, then you can drop the whole first part of the logline. If the 'she' in the second half of the logline is the girl who is having surgery, then she is the lead character and the entire logline shouldRead more

    If the ‘she’ in the second half of the logline is the girl who’s younger sister is going into surgery, then you can drop the whole first part of the logline.

    If the ‘she’ in the second half of the logline is the girl who is having surgery, then she is the lead character and the entire logline should be written from her perspective.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2018In: Action

    When her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father. — All IN

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 25, 2018 at 9:23 am

    If you're going to have the bad guy be Navajo, you should have the father be Native American as well.Perhaps a Navajo law enforcement officer investigating the casino. When he discovers illegal activity they capture him.This event sets the story in motion as the 'wild' younger sister who took on lifRead more

    If you’re going to have the bad guy be Navajo, you should have the father be Native American as well.

    Perhaps a Navajo law enforcement officer investigating the casino. When he discovers illegal activity they capture him.

    This event sets the story in motion as the ‘wild’ younger sister who took on life as a cat burglar (To steal back Navajo artifacts) must convince her by the book and uptight sister to join forces to rescue dad.

    Perhaps the sister is now a district attorney?but in her youth was an amazing poker player.

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