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When a suave playboy’s young lover brings him home to meet her father, an old friend and rival, he begins to fall for the father’s fiancee.
It seems as if what sets the lead character into conflict is actually falling for his rivals fiance' The story would be about what your character does about it. Therefore I wouldn't bury it at the end of the logline. Or to put it another way, this logline is all set-up.
It seems as if what sets the lead character into conflict is actually falling for his rivals fiance’
The story would be about what your character does about it.
Therefore I wouldn’t bury it at the end of the logline.
Or to put it another way, this logline is all set-up.
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"When their new house eats her son, a scared mother must traverse though the evil dwelling discovering it's secrets in order to save her child and escape the house."
“When their new house eats her son, a scared mother must traverse though the evil dwelling discovering it’s secrets in order to save her child and escape the house.”
See lessWhen a man sets out to destroy the family that destroyed his, he ends up falling for the ingenue daughter.
Where does the story begin? What is the specific event that sets the lead character into motion?
Where does the story begin? What is the specific event that sets the lead character into motion?
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