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Series logline: A rich, successful plastic surgeon and reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.
"A rich, successful plastic surgeon and reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems..." This is way too many words to describe your lead character.You have 25-30 words for a logline and you use 12 words to describe your character... way too many words.
“A rich, successful plastic surgeon and reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems…” This is way too many words to describe your lead character.
You have 25-30 words for a logline and you use 12 words to describe your character… way too many words.
See lessHalloween decorations only in October, no flowers in the parkway ? clearly the neighborhood HOA has become tyrannical. A group of moms plot a takeover during their weekly bunco night, and the only thing in their way is the idiot president and his old white guy friends.
A solid idea:"When the HOA president inflicts draconian rules on the residents, a fed up mom, and her friends plot a coup in order to take down they tyrannical dictator of their block."
A solid idea:
“When the HOA president inflicts draconian rules on the residents, a fed up mom, and her friends plot a coup in order to take down they tyrannical dictator of their block.”
See lessWhen a prominent black surgeon in New York does a DNA test to find his family he finds out that he is from a small community of great hunters in ‘Arnhem Land. His life is thrust into chaos when he must cast off the silken symbols of civilization, to become the man, the hunter, the person he has been yearning for his entire life.
Thank you for the clarification. I had no Idea what Arnhem Land was, so when I looked it up online it said Arnhem Land was a community in the Netherlands. You might want to say, outback in your logline for clarification. People know what the Outback is, but Arnhem Land is confusing.
Thank you for the clarification. I had no Idea what Arnhem Land was, so when I looked it up online it said Arnhem Land was a community in the Netherlands. You might want to say, outback in your logline for clarification. People know what the Outback is, but Arnhem Land is confusing.
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