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When the NFL players go on strike, a former collegiate star quarterback and a group of misfits athletes get a second chance to live out their professional football dreams.
The Replacements (2000)
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See lessWhen Langa’s father is crippled financially, Langa’s life takes an about-turn and she struggles to elevate herself to the heights of success using her singing talent.
"When her father is crippled..." Now we have a strong inciting incident. This is a good opener!One of the problems with this is, people don't make money following their dreams of stardom.As a result, when trouble happens, they are usually forced to get a day job to pay the bills.So in the real worldRead more
“When her father is crippled…” Now we have a strong inciting incident. This is a good opener!
One of the problems with this is, people don’t make money following their dreams of stardom.
As a result, when trouble happens, they are usually forced to get a day job to pay the bills.
So in the real world, if her father is crippled and she must become the breadwinner, then she would be forced to get ‘a real job’
The conflict would be trying to take care of her family while still holding onto her dreams.
In your logline, her father is crippled so she pursues her singing career. This, (if not handled correctly) will seem kind of selfish.
Why is she pursuing her dream of stardom while her father is crippled?
It is hard to take care of your family when you are a starving artist.
See lessWith dreams to box at the 2000 Sydney Olympics and provide for his family, a young man is offered a more profitable career by a charismatic crime figure clashing with his values, beliefs and kind-hearted nature.
I like this idea. I think it works.Perhaps each week he is called on to 'collect' money from a character.The character has a problem.Instead of beating the person up or sending a message.The lead character helps them solve their problem.But he has to keep his methods of collection secret because theRead more
I like this idea. I think it works.
Perhaps each week he is called on to ‘collect’ money from a character.
The character has a problem.
Instead of beating the person up or sending a message.
The lead character helps them solve their problem.
But he has to keep his methods of collection secret because the mob wouldn’t like it.
However each week he successfully gets the payment.
Possible title: The Angel with the Broken Nose
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