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After reading your logline, and getting rid of the clutter, I believe your logline needs that one extra thing.You say, she 'must withstand'? but that's a passive action. Lead characters are pro-active, they have a plan of actions.How does your lead character cope with her anti-social cellmate? WhatRead more
After reading your logline, and getting rid of the clutter, I believe your logline needs that one extra thing.
You say, she ‘must withstand‘? but that’s a passive action. Lead characters are pro-active, they have a plan of actions.
How does your lead character cope with her anti-social cellmate? What is her plan?
For instance, does she lie and pretend to be a big-time criminal?
Does she act crazy?
Does she pick a fight with the toughest prisoner to show she is serious?
What’s your lead characters plan of action?
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I am going to try to reduce the word count to see what we have: ---------------------------------------------------------- "When an addicted high-end escort is arrested, she is incarcerated with an anti-social cellmate."
I am going to try to reduce the word count to see what we have:
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“When an addicted high-end escort is arrested, she is incarcerated with an anti-social cellmate.”
When his son demonstrates prodigious Connect 4 skills, a father who was always second-best reconnects with his hyper-competitive family to train the boy and regain the title he lost from their fierce rival family in the quadrennial competition
Who is the lead character?
Who is the lead character?
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